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It certainly did, dear Aaron! I love how it slowly unravels, and how you get a different feeling and the story changes upon a second read, just like looking at a painting. I especially loved this stanza: "From wherever that shameless, blushing grape of a girl has gone." Truly delightful! Thank you for this beautiful poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. 😊❤

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Ahlam Ben Saga
Ahlam Ben Saga

Written by Ahlam Ben Saga

Inspired by nature, the night sky, and the Nine Muses, I write poems from the heart 🌌

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