Like the comment above, I reread your poem out loud and it produced this beautiful melody that made me genuinely smile in contentment. I love how your poetry feels like a fresh breeze. Very beautiful. I am in love withe the color blue and if you read my poems you will notice that I mention it a lot in one way or another, so seeing that two of your poems (so far) spoke of the color made me smile. Beautiful.

"Heavy set, grey sky blue
Pressing in with winter’s hue"

This part warmed my heart. Thank you for sharing!💖✨🍪